Critiques - general

A place to read and critique members' work. NB: some of the best critiquing goes on in "Groups". Either sign up to a group that suits you - or set one up yourself. (Click "Create New" in Groups.)
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Sticky Topic How to give effective feedback
Started By The WordCloud
17 1008
I try to be positive, though I'm not always sure how well I get that ...View
By Malcolm 1 month ago
Sticky Topic Submission Guidelines (IMPORTANT)
Started By The WordCloud
32 1194
Hey - she's not just a pretty face. Good idea, Vero! I shudder to ...View
By Dee 3 months ago
Sticky Topic How to seek an effective critique
Started By The WordCloud
5 634
Hi CJ... I've sent you an email explaining where to post your ...View
By Minxie 5 months ago
Normal Topic Gretchen Grey Chapter 1 Rewrite
Started By kd
6 39
I love your writing style KD , it flows well and left me wanting more ...View
By Cazza 1 hour ago
Normal Topic Hi everyone, here's the first part of my childrens book aimed at 9-12 yr old girlies. Any comments greatly appreciated xx
Started By kaz
4 78
Very nice, kaz. I don't know much about girlies aged 9 - 12 but it ...View
By toilet duck 9 hours ago
Normal Topic Nearly There: Short Story:
Started By Meta Tam When Hi Non
9 61
Nans are darker in the mind than we think. View
By Tinkerbell 20 hours ago
Normal Topic Google Book Settlement
Started By mohinihersom
2 36
Mohini, I gather that the Google database is a place of some ...View
By EmmaD 1 day ago
Normal Topic A Dagger Through Lace (Chapter Four)
Started By Joey
6 64
Thanks! That's a real help! I do read a lot of Sherlock Holmes ...View
By Joey 1 day ago
Normal Topic Introduction of the bad guys - ordeath chapter 8
Started By Jak
3 23
Ach, that happens when you write something with a bit of a funny ...View
By Eshka 1 day ago
Normal Topic Knight of Gilune (prologue and opening chapter) - feedback welcome.
Started By ColinTW
1 20
OK - a couple of general observations... "...stonewall" should be ...View
By Ancient Woodland 2 days ago
Normal Topic The Adventures of Velcro Hedgehog at the circus.
Started By Babs
3 32
Think of the synopsis as the blurb on the back cover - the ...View
By Tinkerbell 2 days ago
Normal Topic Dog-Eared Books Escape Committee Chapters 4, 5, 5, 5, 6 and 7.
Started By Dr Finlay S Kaysbuck.
1 29
Excellent stuff, Doctor. How they ended up running through three ...View
By Aonghus Fallon 2 days ago
Normal Topic My writing blog.
Started By RAnthonyMahan
5 37
I know the feeling - that's why I'm sitting at my laptop at stupid ...View
By Eshka 2 days ago
Normal Topic Am I putting too much detail into the backstory here...
Started By flickimp
0 17
www.laststrider.com ______________________________________ Hi ...View
By flickimp 2 days ago
Normal Topic Chapter 2 - The Last Strider
Started By flickimp
6 37
Hi Chanty See the website for altered version of Chapter 2 and ...View
By flickimp 2 days ago
Normal Topic Advice on Prologue for Fantasy Novel - The Last Strider
Started By flickimp
9 62
Many thanks Noel. The cat is the be-all and the end-all..... but I ...View
By flickimp 2 days ago
Normal Topic Dog-Eared Books Escape Committee Chapters 3 and 4
Started By Dr Finlay S Kaysbuck.
2 24
This is still all holding together very well - but can the good ...View
By Aonghus Fallon 3 days ago
Normal Topic Sample Chapter -C is for Chestnut
Started By Hapless
3 37
Maryluv, if you ever want to increase the font size, just hold down ...View
By Tony 3 days ago
Normal Topic Discipline
Started By norman normington
3 24
I punish myself. I say "No. You can't do anything else today until ...View
By RAnthonyMahan 3 days ago
Normal Topic My work in progress - chapter one. Title still undecided!
Started By Eshka
6 53
Firstly, to cdm and Greyowl - thankyou very much for your useful ...View
By Eshka 3 days ago
Normal Topic Children of Greence - Part Five
Started By Noel
6 62
Having now read the whole story (thanks for emailing) as a print out, ...View
By SM Worsey 3 days ago
Normal Topic Feedback if possible
Started By Jak
5 53
Thanks everyone, I enjoyed writing it. Just nice sometimes to get ...View
By Jak 3 days ago
Normal Topic New - a preface of sorts, feedback appreciated
Started By Eshka
4 52
G'day Eshka, You have something evocative here, and potential to ...View
By Greyowl59 3 days ago
Normal Topic Screenplay about the life of Alexander Pushkin - final section
Started By Vero
3 27
Again, guy, thanks for this - all advice is absolutely invaluable - ...View
By Vero 3 days ago
Normal Topic Screenplay about the life of Alexander Pushkin - repost
Started By Vero
3 25
Thanks very much for this. Will look out for the typos and will think ...View
By Vero 4 days ago